I think the chords are too boring and repetitive. But the song structure is good, and some melodies are very catchy, so good job there.
I think the chords are too boring and repetitive. But the song structure is good, and some melodies are very catchy, so good job there.
Thanks for the feedback!
I don't think stuff made in Music Maker Jam has a place in Newgrounds.
hi :)
that snowcone vibe tho ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Yeah this is nice but I see some volume problems. The beginning is too quiet, if listening in a noisy environment, I have to turn up the volume and then get ear raped later on in the track, specially that synth at 1:24, too damn loud.
Thanks, yeah I kind of noticed that myself after I uploaded it that the lead seemed louder than it should be. So I did some adjusting of volume levels and a bit more EQ'ing to try to balance the mix a bit better. I just now replaced it with the adjusted version so hopefully it won't ear rape anyone anymore lol.
Still, I kind of intended the beginning to be a bit quiet to have a more dramatic effect when the bass and first beat comes in. I listen to a lot of cinematic music and so I have a tendency to use volume dynamics in my songs just like a lot of cinematic and orchestral tracks do, most of which have the same issue if you listen in a noisy environment. I don't know, I just like the effect of the dynamics I guess.
Thanks for pointing all of that out, I appreciate your review. :)
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